First book in a set of three. Liked it so much I got the other 2. Cute story line. Like the MFM idea. Love the island that they meet at. Reminds me of Hawaii, which I love. Could have stretched it out a bit more on the witch and black magic thing. Overall like it enough to get the others.

Short but told well. Good story

Nice story line but found the writing rushed. I love good sex scenes as well as the next girl but this was more raunchy than sexy.

The story could be great, honestly has potential but the HUGE lack of editing really takes away from every moment. It’s impossible to lose yourself in the story when ‘off’ becomes ‘of’. Run on sentences that leave you lost and rereading multiple times before you can understand what’s happening. One of the main characters is introduced by two different names which is incredibly confusing when you have no idea they are the same person. There’s a lack of detail and description when it comes to the location and setting. Half of the book seems like your inside but your not and vice versa.

The base of the story was good and so were the characters but it read like the author was in a rush to get the book done. It was a story of only the highlights and nothing in depth.